New Moon Fanfic: Bonded ch. 1
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This is a Breaking Dawn trailer I made. No real spoilers, just hyping up the book
Please read my prologue and let me know how this is. I'm not sure if I like it or not. Do I need more detail? Are my sentence lengths too uniform?
title- The Butterfly Kiss
genre- sci-fi romance
rating- YA
author- Canace Silvering
Summary- And so the vampire spun me in its cacoon and I would never be the same again (I just wrote that really quick because I don't have a full summary yet and I don't want to give anything away)
This is my first approach at free writing. We'll see how it goes.
I wait
I wait for the laughter to pull me in the dark
I see the light in the distance
Faint, small, flickering
The wind
The wind pushes against the flame
I reach out a hand
If only I could reach it
Pull it in
In
Out I try to force the laughter
But the dark is all I see
No, I see nothing
And there is no laughter
Nothing
Nothing . . . but my thoughts
No sound
Hmmm, interesting . . .